The quality of my writing and blogging improved
drastically throughout the course of the trimester. In the beginning of the
year I didn’t always use the best diction or format, but I think that changed
over the course of my blogging experience. My blogs started to get longer and
they became more in-depth with my thoughts on the reading. One of my better
blogs that I made during the trimester was analyzing the text to make
inferences, and that one was superior to my blog about characterization. I used
better textual evidence to support my claims, and also used better warrants
based on the evidence used. In my analysis of Uglies, I used three pieces of textual evidence and all of them
helped prove my points. Not only did I type out the quotes, but I also analyzed
them to find the meaning behind them and what they can prove to me.
Another thing I did in my later blog post was use
better diction to enhance my writing. I used words like slithering, severe, and
atrocious, instead of using words like sneaking, harsh, and bad. Using good
diction does not only make you look smarter, but it gives your writing life and
makes the reader want to read more. In the first blog post I didn’t even use
correct grammar at some points. A part that I wrote was “but they kept on
getting more mysterious and making their heads boggle”. Instead of using
‘making’, I should have used made because it makes more sense in comparison to
the sentence. Also, I didn’t even use the correct format of typing when I
showed the changed the dialogue. I put the dialogue all in one big paragraph,
instead of creating new paragraphs every time there was a new speaker. Mrs.
Bowman really taught us this, and this was a technique that I used in my blogs
towards the end of the trimester. For all of my textual evidence I used
different paragraphs, and this also helps the paper look neater.
Throughout the trimester, I struggled with the
desire to read, and also trying to do another blog outside of class. I have
never really enjoyed reading, with the exception of a few series. It hasn’t
been one of my interests, which is surprising because I’m a superb reader and
can understand difficult text. I tried to overcome this struggle by setting
certain times for reading most days of the week, but sometimes that didn’t
happen. Often times I would get distracted by other things, or would just have
too much homework in other classes that I needed to focus on. I struggled to
blog because I don’t enjoy reading in the first place, and it was tough for me to
express what I’ve been reading because it didn’t always interest me.
Some things that were my strengths in blogging were
making connections and writing detailed sentences. I’m usually good with
writing appealing sentences that the reader wants to read and using excellent
diction. I guess I sort of reached my reading goal, but I didn’t set it that
high because I don’t read as often as others do. I read one complete book, and
about three quarters of another book. I planned on reading 3-4 books this year,
so I guess I am on pace. I downloaded the Goodreads app on my phone, but truly
I never really used it. I used it to show that I finished a book, but I rarely
got on and updated my pages. I have always been a good reader so I didn’t
improve too much, but reading a tougher book like Uglies made me a better reader. I can read very quickly and
comprehend things well, which is one of my strengths for English class and
life.
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